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ENGL 21007 Writing For Engineering (Spring 2019)
The City College of New York, Spring 2019
-inconsistent indentation
-Personally, I feel first task should be a brief summary of research or something similar
-Explain what is being considered in budget
-reference APA
– Experience is very thorough, I really like it
Overall, the proposal is well written and relatively thorough. The only concern would be some more explanation regarding budget and schedule.
Good morning, this is the ID Scanning group coming at you with some positive feedback. The structure of this proposal seems to be very pleasing because everything is in order. I think the addition of the images is good to see but they could be placed better throughout the proposal so that when you are reading you can visually see that they are saying. The schedule’s chart needs more of an explanation, just add how the cost of construction is added up because it’s just placed there without no extra background, I know you might now not the exact number but just put a formula to how you might find it. overall I think that it is a great idea and a nice proposal.
Overall, I think it is a well written proposal with great structure. I think Task 4 can be explained further, maybe consider adding who will do the analysis and how. The budget needs explanation as well, such as how you got the price of the solar panels.