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1. Hello, this is the printing software proposal team. We reviewed your draft and can offer some feedback. We noticed that there is no purpose section included, and we think that you should come up with a thesis for your proposal to include in that purpose section. In your introduction, we noticed that you strongly worded some phrases such as “causes rampant disease.” We believe that you should alter this to “ Have a tendency to cause diseases.” This would also be more noteworthy if you were able to back that statement up somehow. Otherwise, you are fine with your budgeting and reasoning behind it. Your schedule should come together after that. We suggest that you re-look at the format in the textbook, and make necessary edits to your format. Then you should be good.

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